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Dobrý den, mohl by mi někdo překontrolovat tento popis, resp. opravit nějaké chyby? Děkuji

My dream house.

Our homework was to describe „dream house“. My idea looks like this. My large dream house should be located outside the city, somewhere in the village where everybody knows your name. They would be decent to each other and helpful. In the large garden i should covered swimming pool(heated in winter season). Furthermore, it is found in the garden tennis court and a gazebo with a barbecue. In the house should be small dog and two cats. On the lower ground floor my dream house was should be built sauna and whirlpool. All of the equipment of the house should be modern. In the house could be located big beautiful fireplace and too mini gym with fitness and social facilities. In the bathroom should be build as comfortable bath so massage shower. In the living room I should like to have minibar with wooden chairs, comfortable seats and especially large TV for sports broadcasts it to have some level. In the bedroom should be definitely a big comfortable bed to sleep. I hope that my dream house will be real one.

Our homework was to describe our „dream house“. My idea looks like this. This is how I imagine it: my large dream house should be located outside the city, somewhere in the a village where everybody knows your name.They People there would be decent to each other and helpful.

In the There would be a large garden with an indoor i should covered swimming pool (heated in winter season). Furthermore, it is found a tennis court and a gazebo with a barbecue would be situated in the garden. I would have a small dog and two cats in the house. On the lower ground floor My dream house was should be built have a sauna and a whirlpool downstairs. All of the equipment of in the house should be modern.

Kdybys nerozumnela proc jsem opravil to ci ono zrovna tak, tak se ptej. Je mozne ze se dobereme k formulaci, ktera se ti bude libit vice a bude zaroven spravna.

Děkuji moc, asi rozumím všem tvým upravam, jsou vhodnější-děkuji. Btw toto uz je gramaticky spravne?

In the house could be located big beautiful fireplace and too mini gym with fitness and social facilities. In the bathroom should be build as comfortable bath so massage shower. In the living room I should like to have minibar with wooden chairs, comfortable seats and especially large TV for sports broadcasts it to have some level. In the bedroom should be definitely a big comfortable bed to sleep. I hope that my dream house will be real one.

Neni, ale predpokladam ze tohle je DU, tak prece nemuzes mit vsechno spravne ne? Navic, pokud rozumis mym upravam, tak si muzes nektere veci v tom poslednim odstavci opravit svepomoci. Jsme tu od toho, abychom hlavne pomahali studentum se zlepsit.

Zkusil jsem opravit tu cast, kterou jsi neudelal, je to takto lepší?

There should be located a big beautiful fireplace and too mini gym with fitness and social facilities. In the bathroom should be built comfortable bath and massage shower. I should like to have a minibar with wooden chairs, comfortable seats and especially large TV for sports broadcasts due to quality in the living room. I should be definitely a big comfortable bed to sleep in the bedroom. I hope that my dream house will be real one.

Jen upozorním na pár nejkřiklavějších věcí:
1) I should like to have = “Měla bych ráda mít.” / “Mělo by se mi líbit mít.” Předpokládám, že chcete říci “I would like to have.” Občas mi přijde, že používáte SHOULD starým způsobem na místech, kde se dnes už používá WOULD. “Should” znamená, že by něco “mělo být”.
2) due to = kvůli něčemu (co bylo nebo je), v důsledku něčeho
3) I hope that my dream house will be a real one.

Dekuji ta korekci: takze takto? There should be located a big beautiful fireplace and too mini gym with fitness and social facilities. In the bathroom should be built comfortable bath and massage shower. I would like to have a minibar with wooden chairs, comfortable seats and especially large TV for sports broadcasts ----- quality in the living room. I would like to have definitely a big comfortable bed to sleep in the bedroom. I hope that my dream house will be a real one.

Jeste kvuli cemu je tam prosim ten clen a pred real one?A cim tedy nahradit to due to, aby to tam lepe pasovalo? Dekuji

Ono je tam více chyb, ale jak říkal Karel, v HW nemusí být všechno perfektní, to by bylo podezřelé.
Člen je tam proto, že slovo ONE nahrazuje slovo HOUSE, které je počitatelné a tudíž před ním musí něco být – v našem případě A.
Kdybych měl hodně jednoduše poradit, čím nahradit ono “due to”, tak třeba pomocí “because I want…” a dál si tu větu už upravíte podle logiky. A určitě by bylo lepší v té větě dát “In the living room” na začátek.

Ok, slovo ONE tam je mysleno jako jednou(bude jednou skutecny).

Tak počkejte, to je něco úplně jiného.
Jednou = once
Jeden = one

A real one = skutečný (myšleno skutečný dům)

Pokud chcete říct “bude jednou skutečný”, tak je to spíš “will become reality once” (nebo případně “will come true once”).

Ok to jsem potřeboval vědět. Jinak vazba . I should be built comfortable bath and … je to spravne, nebo by bylo lepe i would be buit nebo to build ? Dekuji

To jsem považoval za překlep. Myslel jsem, že máte na mysli na začátku věty “IT”.
In the bathroom there should be a comfortable bath and massage shower (built).

TEd nejak nerozumim, built tam vubec nebude? Je tam mysleno jako zabudována…

Ani jedno neni spravne.

Mohl bych poprosit o konkretni odpoved, co tam tedy bude? Kdyz bych tam chtel to slovo vybudovano, tak v jake forme je to tedy spravne? Diky.