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Mohli byste se na to prosím někdo podívat. Myslím, že v tom bude njespíš dost chyb, … a zítra to potřebuji odevzdat.

I was in Austria in Vienna this holidays. My parents and brother was with me there. It was just one day trip. We went by car. It took a long time, it was really boring. When we arrived to Vienna, weather was great. It was sunny, but not boiling. My dad wanted sightseeing, but the rest of us didn’t want it, so we went to Prater. It’s one of the biggest fun-fairs on Evrope. There are a lot of attraction. For example switchbacks, big swings and other freaks. My brother really enjoy it. Then it started rain. Luckily it was evening already, so we went home. It was a nice day, but other days, which I spend with my friends was better.

I was in Vienna..asi bych nepsala ze v rakousku,protoze vsichni vedi, ze Viden je v rakousku..
There were my parents and brother with me.
The weather
My dad wanted to go sightseeing.
in Europe
There are lots of attractions.
My brother really enjoyed..
Then it started rainig..
..which I have spent with my friends were better..

Asi jsem nenasla vsechny,ale aspon neco :]

WERE with me…, arrived IN Vienna, THE weather was…, GO sightseeing, IN Europe, There are a lot of ATTRACTIONS., other freaks??? nechápu… My brother ENJOYED…, Then it started raining (to rain), SPENT, WERE… chtělo by to nějaké věty spojit aby to neznělo tak roboticky, některé věty jsou slovosledně pozoruhodné ale to by bylo na dýl…

 

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