Esej na anglické klauzury

 

Zdravím, za chvíli mě čekají anglické klauzury, tak bych byla ráda kdyby mi někdo zkontroloval a opravil eseje. Uvítám jakékoliv rady a tipy :) U klauzur máme vždy dvě části. 1. část je esej – 300 slov, téma se týká cestovního ruchu, 2. část – complaint letter – 250 slov Všem moc děkuji za případnou pomoc :)

Are the world wonders in danger because of tourism?

Amount of tourists in the world grows every year. These enormous numbers of tourist could endanger the world wonders. However the monuments have some level of protection, the mass of holidaymakers are quite thoughtless and irresponsible. People also spend more money on discovering the world beauties which attracts attention of inconsiderate developers and reckless politicians and they are not helping either.
One major disadvantage of modern tourism is commercialisation of touristic localities. The more famous the place is, the more tourists come here. A rising number of tourists requires new highways, hotels, shopping centres and other facilities. Developers usually invest a lot of money into the city infrastructure and that means the politicians also profit from this, so they look away. Due to this fact no one in the high positions care about the environment and surroundings of monuments.
It is argued that there are created new reservations and monuments have higher level of protection. It could be truth but it is needles while exalted people ignore the rules and borders of protected areas.
What is more, modern mass tourism has negative impact on the traditional culture and environment. Sometimes it even leads to destruction of the attractions. It is because tourists do not always respect local traditions, rules in the reservations and their behaviour is not appropriate to the place and situation. For example they can start forest fires, destroy sandstone rocks and increase pollution.
Of course (/On the other hand,) there are some positive aspects of tourism. Tourists bring money which can be invested in the protection and restoration of monuments. Increasing attractiveness of the localities brings attention of different organisations like UNESCO, which are interested in protection of world wonders.
In conclusion, the architectonic and natural monuments are not endangered by tourism itself, but by unconcerned and disrespectful tourists. As I see it, we should think about ourselves and improve our behaviour.

2.Letter of complaint

Valentina
The Alps Eagle
Bělohorská 64
160 00 Prague
Czech Republic

Mr. Johan Garter
Ziller street 31
6290 Arzl im Pitzal
Austria

4th May 2015

Dear Mr. Garter,

I am writing to inform you that our travel agency The Alps Eagle recently received some complaint letters from our clients. They were disappointed with the services you provided on the camp-site in Arzl im Pitzal.

We ordered a package for ten people from 18th to 25th April. This package should contain accommodation in tents, dinners with choice of two meals, Czech speaking guide and canoes with equipment. Unfortunately there appear several problems during the stay.

First problem concerned the guide. Not only he did not speak Czech but he also was not acquainted with the area.

Our clients also pointed out the misleading information in your brochure. Instead of tents there were cabins for which they had to pay an extra fee. Moreover the stated canoes were replaced with rafts.

Finally, although we ordered dinners with choice of two meals, there was only one meal. When our clients expressed their discontent, the staff answered that it is not their problem.

In response to these problems our company expect you to pay back the difference between ordered and provided services. You should improve the quality of your services or correct your brochure. Our customers would also appreciate an apology from your company.

We cooperate with you for ten years already and we have never received such a bad feedback to your services. I believe you have some reasonable explanation. However if this situation is going to repeat, we will be forced to end our partnership.

I look forward to your response.

Yours sincerely,

Valentina

1. However, the monuments …

2. Unfortunately there appeared several problems during the stay. – beru to tak, že píšete o minulosti

Not only did he not speak Czech …

Moreover, the stated… pozor na čárky

We have been cooperating with you for ten years already …

However, if this situation should repeat – kdyby se situace náhodou opakovala – takhle mi to přijde vhodnější..

Děkuji :) pokud dám situation should repeat, bude pak we will be forced to…? A ještě k eseji, co je lepší? Of course (/On the other hand,) there are some positive aspects of tourism. Asi on the other hand?

Ano, will se hodí nejlépe, nejde o plán. Ke druhé otázce, tam by klidně mohlo být oboje, ale asi bych též volil tu druhou možnost.

Ještě jsem se díval na předložku u feedback, toto slovíčko se pojí s on.

… and we have never received such a bad feedback on your services.

 

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